Alone on Sea

Alone i lay on a wooden raft
Alone i stay in the dark
Alone i pray to survive
Alone i may not survive

Alone i look out the sea
Alone i wake up on the sea
Alone i seek out for help
Alone i may not survive

Alone i eat my dry food
Alone i drink the salty water
Alone i sit in the cold
Alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i stare at the storm
Alone, yes, alone i live on the sea
Alone, yes, alone i wait for the rescue boat
Alone, yes, alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i pray to be safe
Alone, yes, alone i call out for help
Alone, yes, alone i get on the boat
Alone, yes, alone i was rescued

Alone, yes, alone i lived on sea for months
Alone, yes, alone i walk ashore unaided
Alone, yes, alone i continue to hold the
Guinness World Record for survival at sea

This poem is dedicated to Poon Lim. After reading a book called ‘Sole Surviver’ written by Rythanne Lum McCunn, I wrote this poem about Poon Lim who lived on sea on a wooden raft for 133 days and survived.

Allush …

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  1. البؤساء قال:

    this person lived at sea for 133 days and said about his suffering what he said , but if he was a muslim , pray to allah for survive
    he must bless to allah lord of world ,
    not bless to anyone else

    yahya

  2. نُـون قال:

    Broth Yahya
    I know You’r right
    But some times we need Others In any way
    I’m so thankful

  3. no… never I was alone and never I will be alone
    aways there are many friends… may brothers and all are my friends
    I can’t said AlOnE as never I was alone
    AlOnE… I haven’t on my dictioanary maybe I was never alone

    thank you so much… but why you are like thisK dark and alone
    don’t forget that you have a lot… you have God and you have us
    I’m your boy, brother, sister and dead or mom too
    I’m what you want… just want me

  4. نُـون .. الْمِحْبَرةُ .. قال:

    Some times we feel it among people
    Thanks for Ur words
    U make me smile
    Best regards
    Note
    ( I did not write this poem)

  5. أنثى المطر قال:

    ni hao….means hi in Chinese
    whatever

  6. نُـونْ قال:

    ha ha ha
    I like it :)
    keep in touch

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