Alone on Sea « المحبرة

Alone on Sea

Alone i lay on a wooden raft
Alone i stay in the dark
Alone i pray to survive
Alone i may not survive

Alone i look out the sea
Alone i wake up on the sea
Alone i seek out for help
Alone i may not survive

Alone i eat my dry food
Alone i drink the salty water
Alone i sit in the cold
Alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i stare at the storm
Alone, yes, alone i live on the sea
Alone, yes, alone i wait for the rescue boat
Alone, yes, alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i pray to be safe
Alone, yes, alone i call out for help
Alone, yes, alone i get on the boat
Alone, yes, alone i was rescued

Alone, yes, alone i lived on sea for months
Alone, yes, alone i walk ashore unaided
Alone, yes, alone i continue to hold the
Guinness World Record for survival at sea

This poem is dedicated to Poon Lim. After reading a book called ‘Sole Surviver’ written by Rythanne Lum McCunn, I wrote this poem about Poon Lim who lived on sea on a wooden raft for 133 days and survived.

Allush …

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البؤساء قال:

28 سبتمبر 2009 عند 12:53 ص

this person lived at sea for 133 days and said about his suffering what he said , but if he was a muslim , pray to allah for survive
he must bless to allah lord of world ,
not bless to anyone else

yahya
نُـون قال:

1 أكتوبر 2009 عند 10:53 ص

Broth Yahya
I know You’r right
But some times we need Others In any way
I’m so thankful
أبوبكر نور قال:

26 أكتوبر 2009 عند 7:49 م

no… never I was alone and never I will be alone
aways there are many friends… may brothers and all are my friends
I can’t said AlOnE as never I was alone
AlOnE… I haven’t on my dictioanary maybe I was never alone

thank you so much… but why you are like thisK dark and alone
don’t forget that you have a lot… you have God and you have us
I’m your boy, brother, sister and dead or mom too
I’m what you want… just want me
نُـون .. الْمِحْبَرةُ .. قال:

27 أكتوبر 2009 عند 10:44 ص

Some times we feel it among people
Thanks for Ur words
U make me smile
Best regards
Note
( I did not write this poem)
أنثى المطر قال:

10 نوفمبر 2009 عند 8:01 ص

ni hao….means hi in Chinese
whatever
نُـونْ قال:

10 نوفمبر 2009 عند 11:08 ص

ha ha ha
I like it
keep in touch
حسان الأنصاري قال:

4 يناير 2010 عند 2:44 م

alone, trying to figure out how it’s gonna be
alone, hoping that someone will see
that I’m dying right here right now
at the middle of the sea..
..
..
dedicated to you
Hassan

Alone on Sea

Alone i lay on a wooden raft Alone i stay in the dark Alone i pray to survive Alone i may not survive

Alone i look out the sea Alone i wake up on the sea Alone i seek out for help Alone i may not survive

Alone i eat my dry food Alone i drink the salty water Alone i sit in the cold Alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i stare at the storm Alone, yes, alone i live on the sea Alone, yes, alone i wait for the rescue boat Alone, yes, alone i may not survive

Alone, yes, alone i pray to be safe Alone, yes, alone i call out for help Alone, yes, alone i get on the boat Alone, yes, alone i was rescued

Alone, yes, alone i lived on sea for months Alone, yes, alone i walk ashore unaided Alone, yes, alone i continue to hold the Guinness World Record for survival at sea